Weekend Writing Warriors: Sunday 23 March 2014 (Character Interview: Inside the Jump)

Temn’s niece Martisset will be extended the offer once more;  I think that he has an odd partiality to her, in spite of her past refusal of his projects.

Clever, if she meant to take power. Each time he offers her more, because her adamant refusal means that she has will, and if that will not be opposed to his but combined, great things can be accomplished.

I see her cold closed face, aloof as the ice and much its color, and I think of the fanatics of the Sacred Conspiracy. I do not think that he will succeed. She will carry the banner of her own notions unto death, in the teeth of opposition and for the sheer joy of it. Hers is not the face of a scholar but a warrior — unlike that silent lieutenant of hers, the stocky dark woman with the bland expression, who stands at a very great distance from anything contemporary. Now that is a scholar, be she historian or archaeologist, for I recognize her look, that thousand-yard stare into the dead past, because it speaks what my face would, if it still spoke the same language as mortals.

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Character interview with the Immortal of T-7, from NaNo 2013, Inside the Jump. Weekend Writing Warriors offers eight-sentence excerpts from a variety of writers; see the other excerpts here.

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4 Responses to Weekend Writing Warriors: Sunday 23 March 2014 (Character Interview: Inside the Jump)

  1. daezarkian says:

    You probably get bored of me telling you how much I love your prose. ;D I love the flow of language here, as ever. Terrific work!

  2. This story and the people are endlessly fascinating. The small details are seamlessly woven into the narrative and just draw me in…I always wants to know more. Great 8!

  3. Great writing, as usual.

  4. Love this: “Hers is not the face of a scholar but a warrior…” Wonderful snippet full of imagery and packed with info. Good 8 :-)

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