Weekend Writing Warriors: Sunday 3 January 2016 (WIP: Ship’s Heart)

Each Sunday, Weekend Writing Warriors offers a selection of eight-sentence excerpts from writers in multiple genres and forms. Check out the full roster here.

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They had a glorious view of the planet Karis from the transit station. The station was the place-between, where they were poked and prodded by med-servos and received a sort of orientation to the local ecosystem, with the promise that the Academy orientation would tell them more.

After the first two weeks, Jehen and Yasmin and Ferenc were joined by cadets drafted from the Outer Colonies.

With a great deal of laughter and pantomime, they settled in to exchanging stories about their home places; most of the new arrivals hailed from terraforming projects, with a preponderance of people who had Iskra somewhere in their name–the terraforming great-clan.

One of the Outer Colonies cadets explained that they weren’t really members of any of the Karis clan-branches, even those of Iskra. Their lineage had diverged too far back.

Jehen found that greatly unsatisfactory as an explanation. If you were related, you were related, no matter how far back.

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Jehen, Yasmin, and Ferenc arrive in Karis orbit en route to the Academy. From work in progress, Ship’s Heart (NaNo 2015).

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Weekend Writing Warriors: Sunday 27 December 2015 (WIP: Ship’s Heart)

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Martisset was so absorbed in studying the models for death-correspondence that she didn’t hear her father enter the room; he must have glimpsed the sigil of the Storm-Chapel before she closed the tablet, given what he said next.

“You don’t have to study everything,” he said, “because there are models for a reason. No one will expect originality under those circumstances.”

She was a little startled, that he didn’t reassure her that she’d never need it.

“Do you really think I’m going to have to take the white letter to Yasmin’s parents?”

Her father crossed arms and bowed. “If fate relents, she’ll grow out of it … but there are influences at the Academy.”

Martisset waited to hear more.

“I have no doubt you’ll pass them by without a second glance, but beware anyone who tries to convince you that you’re better by birth; I’d rather you make friends with Outer Colonies dome-folk than some of our young bloods.”

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Martisset on the eve of departure to the Academy. From work in progress, Ship’s Heart (NaNo 2015).

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Weekend Writing Warriors: Sunday 20 December 2015 (WIP: Ship’s Heart)

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Yasmin didn’t like to think of herself as naive, but the glories of the universe included black holes at the heart of galaxies, exploding stars, and the wreckage of unlucky planets. On the other side of the hull (she patted the wall experimentally, still seeing with the faint overlay of Ship’s eyes that she touched an internal partition with Crew’s passages and a layer of safety compartments) lethal Void surrounded them on all sides.

Even traversing the Jump, there was a nonzero risk of transit failure.

That’s what they called it, bloodlessly. “Transit failure.”

Nobody knew what it was like, because nobody had ever returned from it.

Yasmin took a deep breath, let it out, let the Ship’s presence swim through her. Yes, she could feel the pulsing signals, the edge of the vast intelligences that threaded through the Ship, the Captains’ shadows, the musical branching in shades of blue and green and yellow, gently rolling through the spectrum, that must be the Ship’s Heart, the great pulse that kept them all going.

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Yasmin Sure-Hand en route to the Academy. From work in progress, Ship’s Heart (NaNo 2015).

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Weekend Writing Warriors: Sunday 13 December 2015 (WIP: Ship’s Heart)

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“You won’t be expected to make a clan-marriage till you’re well into your profession,” her mother went on, “but there are prospects you ought to watch.” She fluttered hands over her tablet, and Martisset’s own sprang to life. “Personal inclination is one thing, and character. Watch, watch and wait. All sorts of things look good in theory. See what they’re made of, see how they choose when it’s matters of small moment.”

Martisset glanced down at the list that had appeared on the screen. 

All girls, the ones she recognized; how her mother or father had discerned her own inclinations, she didn’t know, nor had they discussed it.

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Martisset gets the Talk from her mother on the eve of her departure for the Academy. From work in progress, Ship’s Heart (NaNo 2015).

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Weekend Writing Warriors: Sunday 6 December 2015 (WIP: Ship’s Heart)

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Shamali smirked at the cadet-portrait. “Odd looking creature.”

“Well, genetic variation, so they’ve got a much bigger genetic treasury here than we do, so you see odd stuff. Green eyes, though, just like yours,” Genubi said to Jehen.

“Maybe an Astok somewheres-a-back,” Ferenc said, quoting the Ship’s Doctor. Genubi cleared her throat, and Ferenc settled into silence.

“Zubenelgenubi–that’s their mother’s gene-line by the name of her parents’ marriage-patron, Zubeneshamali–that’s their father’s gene-line, same business. Tethys is the given name of our Martisset’s parents’ marriage-patron, and Saiph is the patron-line within great-clan Astok.”

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Genubi and her twin brother Shamali explain the kinship system of the Mother of Worlds to Jehen and her siblings, using as example the cadet Martisset Zubenelgenubi Zubeneshamali Tethys Saiph yr Astok.

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NaNoFeed: excerpt from the side project (“Self Insert”)

This year for NaNoWriMo I took on two projects: the novel Ship’s Heart (space opera) and the novella Self Insert (contemporary fantasy). The following excerpt is a text exchange between Shonda (a medical necromancer and librarian) and her friend Natalya/Tasha (a writer).

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So Tasha? I got some stuff for you.

🙂

No, not good news. She’s summoning a subjunctive spirit. They’re not real. You can’t banish them.

I threw salt in its face and it went.

Temporary relief is as good as you’re gonna get. 😦

Shit.

Shit would be about the size of it. There’s worse. You said she’s not using a pentagram.

Nope. She thinks it gets in the way of the Muse.

Well duh, that’s the point. Authorial distance is good for mental health.

OK.

Watch out if he goes away without you chasing him. He won’t be gone.

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It’s rare but stories can eat people. Just be careful.

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The Muse of Research: Interview with Kate Elliott

Kate Elliott is my contemporary by age and my elder by career. Over the last decades, she’s been steadily producing a wide-ranging body of work in science fiction and fantasy, with brilliantly realized settings from the deep past to the far future, from steampunk worlds with magic and dinosaurs (the Spiritwalker trilogy) to a variety of space-opera futures. I reviewed a retrospective volume of her work here.

Active on Twitter, she’s an outspoken advocate for a broader, richer, and more inclusive vision of science fiction and fantasy. If we understand the unacknowledged range of human contributions in the past, we can build much more realistic visions for the possibilities of the future.

Kate Elliott took time from a very busy schedule of writing, revising, and promoting her work to grant this interview. As reader, I’m entertained; as writer, I’m taking notes.

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Talk about your nonfictional obsessions! (could be academic training, stuff you like to read about, topics that pique your curiosity)

From childhood I’ve been fascinated by mythology, cosmology, religion, and the working of the heavens. As a child I wouldn’t have analyzed it the way I do now, but I think of it as asking questions about the world. What do people believe about how the universe came to be? How do stories explain us to ourselves?

I just always wanted to know things, and I remember as a teen having a conversation with my older brother in which he insisted that our knowing the scientific explanation for what stars are was by definition more awe-inspiring than the older stories–the myths, if you will–that people used to tell to explain what they saw in the sky and why the heavens acted as they did (the precession of the equinoxes, the movement of the planets, the rising and setting of sun and moon, etc). I argued that we do not have to create a hierarchy of awe, that awe is part of the human sensation of looking at the heavens, at the world, at nature.

I toyed for a while with majoring in astronomy but decided against it. I studied music for a while, including composition, but decided against pursuing it. Anthropology and history also exert a pull on me, and I’m doing reading on geography now that I wish I had done earlier. In general I wish I had read everything. My father once warned me against becoming a dilettante because my interests seemed to spread so widely rather than deeply but in retrospect I think wide interests help me as a writer. The depth is the time and skill I put into the writing itself.

How do they find their way into your fiction?

I think my interests shine all over my writing and are probably easy to trace.

For example, in each of my series I tend to explore the role religion plays in the societies my characters move through. In some cases, as with Crown of Stars, religion is literally part of the plot in that changes within the dominant religion is one of the major conflicts the story deals with. In others, such as the Spiritwalker Trilogy, religion is part of the cultural backdrop through which the characters move, as for example the narrator Cat Barahal often calls on or refers to or swears by the goddess Tanit. In the Crossroads Trilogy, the religion of the Hundred forms part of the structure of daily life and order, and in Black Wolves, which takes place decades after Crossroads, the intrusion of a foreign religion creates disruption in the indigenous traditions of the land.

The magic system in Crown of Stars is clearly influenced by my love for the history of astronomy and the workings of the heavens, with power literally drawn down from the stars by magicians who have studied for years to understand the movement of the stars and planets and how the weave and manipulate them.

The Jaran books display my interest in the Silk Road histories because they themselves take place in a continental setting with steppe nomad tribes, conquest, and trade routes.

Any story inspired by something interesting (nonfictonal) that you learned?

For the last five years my spouse has been co-director of an archaeological project in the Delta region of Egypt. The site, Tell Timai, is a Greco-Roman era site, and as I proofread some of his abstracts and articles on the dig I became interested in what a dynamic and interesting period it is, especially in the context of the greater Hellenistic period of that time across the Mediterranean and Near East.

As I began reading just for my own interest I realized what a great template Greco-Roman Egypt could be as a setting for a fantasy story, with its conquering upper class ruling over a much larger indigenous population and the genuinely fascinating interchange between the two as both Greeks and Egyptians began to absorb bits and pieces of influence from each other. Ultimately this setting, in much transmuted form, turned into Court of Fives.

What’s the interplay, for you, between project-specific research and writing?

I usually stumble onto a detail or culture or time period that interests me and read a bit about it. Later my unconscious mind will link it up with a character and that will morph into a story idea. At some point I will decide I need to get to better know the area (which might be history, culture, religion, architecture, etc) and will do general reading to build up my base of knowledge. Once I start writing, I will look for and research increasingly specific topics.

For example, while writing the Spiritwalker books I read E.C. Pielou’s After the Ice Age: The Return of Life to Glaciated North America to familiarize myself with the process of how and at what speed vegetation re-establishes itself as ice sheets retreat.

I also read Amadou Hampâté Bâ’s Aspects of African Civilization (Person, Culture, Religion), translated from the French by Susan B. Hunt, which includes chapters on “Notes on the Notion of Person in the Fulani and Bambara Traditions” and “Remarks on Culture: Wisdom and the Linguistic Question in Black Africa.” This latter chapter includes the remark (which I believe is echoed in the Spiritwalker universe) “At this point it is useful to explain that in Africa, the side of things that is visible and apparent always corresponds to an invisible and hidden aspect which is like its source or principle.”

As I worked on the Jaran books I read some general books on the Mongols and slowly moved on into more specialized articles like Denis Sinor’s “Horse and Pasture in Inner Asian History,” published in Oriens Extremis in 1972.

Research for Crossroads found me reading articles on naphtha in Aramco World, a magazine published by the Saudi Arabia Oil Company.

The key in all of this is that I am genuinely curious about and engrossed by these details. I read this stuff because it interests me, and I suppose the best way of putting it is that the things that fascinate me flow through my mind and into the story, even if only as tiny details.

A nonfictional detail that saved your story/characters/setting from being boring/stereotypical or otherwise not up to your artistic standards?

When I was reading about the Mande language and culture area, and later when I traveled in Mali for three weeks, I learned about and observed the greeting ritual that is traditional in Malian culture. One of the best of the academic articles I read was on Maninka, a chapter by Charles Bird and Timothy Shopen from Languages and Their Speakers, Winthrop Publishers, 1979, ed. by T Shopen. Besides making the point that each language is “a unique cultural artifact” and going into detail on aspects of grammar and pronunciation, the chapter discusses how language is used within the society.

The co-authors spend an entire sub-chapter discussing the highly developed and extensive forms used for greetings and leave-takings, which reflect a cultural respect for and valuing of social ties. When I visited Mali I saw this in action and made an effort to learn the basics of the interchange (I was really bad at it, and it was really great that I tried because Malians have the best sense of humor). In terms of writing Spiritwalker, introducing this aspect of greeting into the story gives the setting a distinctness that sets it apart from a more generic 19th century European landscape and also suggests a culture with respect for social ties.

What kind of nonfictional info are you addicted to?

I never stop buying books about the Silk Road, even though I have yet to read all the ones I own. I have no idea why this subject compels me but I suspect it has something to do with the dream of traveling into endlessly shifting landscapes as well as the endless fascination of a history marked by change and flux.

What new topics are on your horizon for further reading?

I have just become infatuated with the story and life of naturalist Alexander von Humboldt so I imagine I will be reading his masterwork, Cosmos: A Sketch of the Physical Description of the Universe, which was a worldwide bestseller in the mid 19th century. I don’t know if Carl Sagan and Neil deGrasse Tyson were directly influenced by Humboldt’s work but they are definitely his inheritors. As Cosmos is a long book written in a more formal style this will doubtless take me a year or more. One of the many exciting things about this work is that he only started working on it when he was sixty-five. There is hope for older writers!

 

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Weekend Writing Warriors: Sunday 29 November 2015 (WIP: Ship’s Heart)

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“My head’s going to explode,” Ferenc said.

“Oh no it’s not,” Genubi said, “so, Ferenc the Gossip, let’s look at the old Captain’s name-bearer here, and I’ll explain it.”

Shamali reached over and cabled Yasmin’s tablet to a socket in the table; the opposite wall lit up with the ranks of flat images of the cadets in their year. The cadet-portrait filled the frame, with the name beneath: Martisset Zubenelgenubi Zubeneshamali Tethys Saiph yr Astok. They had pale hair cropped to the skull on one side, long and floppy on the other, all but obscuring the eye. In the portrait, they stood very straight, with one long-fingered pale hand resting on sword-knot, dressed in tunic and surcoat like the festival costumes they’d just seen at the Midsummer parade and the officiators at the Shipwrights’ Chapel: grey stitched in silver and blue.

“Martisset is their name-line,” Genubi said, “that’s your given name, and you’re expected to do something similar to your namesake. And that’s a weird name, by the way: child of the god of war.”

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The Muse of Research: Interview with Aliette de Bodard

In the last few years, Aliette de Bodard has become one of my favorite science fiction and fantasy writers. Her settings are impeccably realized, from an AU Aztec Empire where the magic works as advertised (the Obsidian and Blood detective trilogy, soon to be re-released) to a Vietnamese space empire where AIs are respected elders (On a Red Station, Drifting, reviewed here). Her most recent world-building tour de force is The House of Shattered Wings, set in a post-apocalyptic magical Belle Époque Paris where fallen angels are both powers and prey.

All of these fictional worlds come to life as a result of wide-ranging research. Not coincidentally, de Bodard is also an accomplished essayist and commentator on topics as various as the political mechanism of colonialism, the world-wide diversity of story forms, tokenism in literary history, and alternate models for science-fiction and fantasy in a world that encompasses the entire globe.

Both as reader and writer I found her thoughts on the Muse of Research both fascinating and immediately useful. I hope that my readers will as well.

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Talk about your nonfictional obsessions! (could be academic training, stuff you like to read about, topics that pique your curiosity).

I’m a big nonfiction reader–I tend to be very curious and to accumulate books on things that catch my fancy even outside of writerly research. I admit to a fondness for history and science, and particularly history and science of cooking, which means I own a bunch heavy books on why bread rises and how we got there in the first place! (I will also quite happily devour anything related to folklore and mythology, though I admit that’s borderline nonfiction).

How do they find their way into your fiction?

Meals are pretty important in my fiction, so all that reading up on how to prepare them has paid off! I use food as a cultural signifier, an indication of the state of the world (who can afford what food and what foods are known/unknown/commonly consumed), a way to group people in the same room (meals are the first thing that come to mind for many people when you say this, but actually I find the act of preparing the food a more interesting thing to look into–I set a lot of scenes from my latest novel, The House of Shattered Wings, in a kitchen, and bread-making was an essential component of creating a bond between two characters).

Any story inspired by something interesting (nonfictonal) that you learned?

All the time! I generally put together stories by smashing together two or more disparate ideas: a lot of the time both come from research, or else I’d be running in closed circles. Most recently, I wrote, “Crossing the Midday Gate” (for Athena Andreadis’s To Shape the Dark) was directly inspired by 19th Century medicine and the race to develop vaccines, in particular with the life of Waldemar Haffkine (who discovered the vaccine against cholera and was later dismissed following a scandal in the vaccination campaigns he ran in India). I learnt a lot about plagues and epidemics, as well as medical research and the shortcuts one is tempted to make; and then applied that to an intergalactic plague that struck both humans and mindships.

What’s the interplay, for you, between project-specific research and writing?

It depends how you define “project-specific”? I tend to make a difference between: a. the stuff I read purely for pleasure, b. the stuff I read before starting on a particular book, which is a lot of groundwork, brainstorming and idea generations more than it is project-specific (and what I don’t use in a given book will often get recycled elsewhere), and c. the fine-tuning I do when actually writing a book or a story, for instance when a scene requires me to, say, know how a particular planet orbits its sun and how scientists would go about studying it.

A nonfictional detail that saved your story/characters/setting from being boring/stereotypical or otherwise not up to your artistic standards?

When I wrote The House of Shattered Wings, I was all set to do a “classic” Gothic 19th Century novel (except with added magic and Fallen angels): mostly everyone was French, and I hadn’t really given conscious thought to diversity. I then read an article on Vietnamese immigrants during WWI and WWII, which was a salutary reminder that there had been POCs everywhere, even in 19th Century France–and that there was no reason why my setting couldn’t have some of these, too!

What kind of nonfictional info are you addicted to?

Anything that catches my fancy!

What new topics are on your horizon for further reading?

Currently I’m doing a lot of work for the follow-up to The House of Shattered Wings, The House of Binding Thorns: I’m reading a lot on the history of immigrant communities and their ties with local communities (and in particular on the history of Vietnamese people in France and French people in Vietnam, though both are not easy to find documentation on). I’m also reading up on the history and practice of medicine in France, and on the practice of Chinese/Vietnamese traditional medicine, as I’m intending to have a main character who is a doctor. Also, as usual for the series, on the history of Paris and the French administrative system, and on nifty hidden spots in famous monuments, which make for great set-pieces!

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Weekend Writing Warriors: Sunday 15 November 2015 (WIP: Ship’s Heart)

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“Well, we’re not in their kinship network, so to put it bluntly, we’re not really people to them. And there are some who say we don’t belong here at all.” Genubi made a sour face. “Some of them think things ought to just come to them because of their name, which isn’t at all what the whole clan-prestige thing means in the first place, but hey, theory and practice.”

“So what happened?” Jehen asked. Clearly something had.

“Someone gave Shamali a drugged drink,” Genubi said. “And luckily I was there, and had been drinking from my own canteen, because thank you no, I don’t drink with my enemies. And Mavra did teach us a thing or two, so somebody was at the infirmary next day with a broken wrist.”

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