“Ooh, your cutie’s on duty.” Rafe smirked, and Annie shushed him. Not that you could hide stuff like that from Rafe, because he had a supernaturally sharp eye for love drama. And she’d been fool enough to tell him, but didn’t you tell your almost-brother these things anyway?
Bertie the barista must have heard, because he tipped her a slow, solemn wink.
Rafe nudged her. “See, he likes you too.”
***
This month’s Six Sentence Sunday excerpts come from books that will be revised and released in calendar year 2013.
suggestive! Nice dialogue, I like the play between characters. Brilliant wordplay as usual.
learned a lot just from these sentences. I’m finally home 😀
Good dialogue, giving an insight into character.