Six Sentence Sunday, 20 January 2013 (Annie Brown and the Superhero Blues)

“Ooh, your cutie’s on duty.” Rafe smirked, and Annie shushed him. Not that you could hide stuff like that from Rafe, because he had a supernaturally sharp eye for love drama. And she’d been fool enough to tell him, but didn’t you tell your almost-brother these things anyway? 

Bertie the barista must have heard, because he tipped her a slow, solemn wink. 

Rafe nudged her. “See, he likes you too.” 

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This month’s Six Sentence Sunday excerpts come from books that will be revised and released in calendar year 2013.

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3 Responses to Six Sentence Sunday, 20 January 2013 (Annie Brown and the Superhero Blues)

  1. suggestive! Nice dialogue, I like the play between characters. Brilliant wordplay as usual.

  2. Sue says:

    learned a lot just from these sentences. I’m finally home 😀

  3. Good dialogue, giving an insight into character.

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