Weekend Writing Warriors, Sunday 9 November 2014 (NaNoFeed)

Xue turned her head in the direction of Hernan’s glance, and swore, “Fuckin’ hull-breach with feet. Tikhon.”

“Language,” Timur said, in his capacity as elder sibling.

Hernan, on the other hand, laughed aloud. “That’s a pretty succinct translation,” he said. 

“You know her?” Melisand asked.

“Oh, worse. My guardian wanted me to conclude a clan-marriage with her.”


Excerpt from one of my NaNo 2014 projects: untitled romance with ray guns. Because everything’s better with ray guns. (Note about names: Tikhon is a Russian man’s name, but in the Ship’s Heart universe, most names can be given to either sex. Melisand, Timur, and Xue, in spite of the geographic variety in their given names, are siblings.)

Weekend Writing Warriors offers a selection of eight-sentence excerpts from many different writers. For the full selection, see here.


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4 Responses to Weekend Writing Warriors, Sunday 9 November 2014 (NaNoFeed)

  1. Enjoying these, along with your NaNoFeeds!

  2. LOL Awesome! And “fucking hull breach with feet” just became my new go-to curse phrase. =D

  3. Eleri Stone says:

    Nice realistic and well-paced dialogue! Brings you right into the moment.

  4. Interesting little discussion they’re having! I thought the curse phrase was terrific and inventive….great snippet.

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