Weekend Writing Warriors: Sunday 15 February 2015 (Tales from the Inhabited Worlds)

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I don’t remember being born the first time, nor do I remember the First Song they sang to encourage my gene-mother Sita in her labors. There were three of them leading that chorus, Matar and Estrel and Altair.

My gene-father was Matar, star-of-the-rain, and my gene-mother, Sita. Both their names came from the archives of the Original World, which we take for good fortune. Rain and earth; my father was the most talented singer of his generation, and his voice spanned a greater range than anyone’s I ever heard, even on Karis or the Downlink.

When I was small and sat in his lap, I could feel his voice thrumming through me, and I would sing along, in my own range. He had great power as a singer; it was he who taught me how to sustain a note at full force for longer than one would think possible. He knew his own breath; once or twice he gambled his own life on that, to accomplish a rescue. His work-crew had to do with safety and (in worst case) recovery of survivors and casualties alike.

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Excerpt from “The Resurrection of Yasmin Sure-Hand,” in Tales from the Inhabited Worlds.

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7 Responses to Weekend Writing Warriors: Sunday 15 February 2015 (Tales from the Inhabited Worlds)

  1. Cara Bristol's avatar Cara Bristol says:

    Nice writing. Well done.

  2. daezarkian's avatar daezarkian says:

    Beautiful. I love the idea of communication based around song.

  3. Mmmm. Gorgeous snippet as always!

  4. Quite a world you’ve built. It’s quite intricate, and your descriptions are well done.

  5. Beautiful and fascinating as always….makes me want to ask your characters questions (lots of questions!) and have a log conversation with them. Excellent excerpt!

  6. Mari's avatar Mari says:

    I love the way the passage is written! You spoke about song and singing, and the passage to me had its own kind of musicality.

  7. Ed Hoornaert's avatar Ed Hoornaert says:

    Beautiful, evocative writing. For some reason I imagine a sitar accompanying the singers.

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