Six Sentence Sunday, 14 October 2012 (Annie Brown and the Superhero Blues)

Her parents were definitely old-school, what with naming their children after angels and Greek gods, and so were their old school-friends the Jacksons: really, Raphael Perseus and Artemis Anael. A. A. Brown. Way too many A’s, she thought, and that was what she had to get. It made a difference if they were A-pluses or just plain A’s. Beulah Mae and Martin had lived their entire school careers under the glare of publicity: would they live up to the Awesome Responsibility of Super Powers, or would they turn out to be the kind of no-accounts who ended up as Supervillains instead? Or would they get caught doing drugs and be expelled, or simply flunk out, and save the administration the trouble of kicking them out? 

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Annie Brown and the Superhero Blues is currently being revised for publication.

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Six Sentence Sunday, 7 October 2012 (Max and the Ghost)

No one was quite so enthusiastic about that sort of sin as the sinners themselves, grown weary; in one breath they’d be talking about how drunk they got in college and what pranks they’d gotten up to (generally involving property damage and a lot of work to clean up, work for someone else). Then in the next it was ‘these kids today have no values.’ Max would turn on the vacuum cleaner and pretend he didn’t hear.

Actually there were lots of conversations he had to pretend he didn’t hear, especially the ones about things they’d visited on the boys who weren’t manly enough or the girls they considered ugly. When those grown men waxed nostalgic about the cruelties they had committed in adolescence, Max thought about the gangs at school that he avoided. It had been particularly bad when he was twelve and thirteen, until he had met Erika and Chloe and Thaddeus.

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Max and the Ghost was released this week by Glass Knife Press.

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Six Sentence Sunday, 30 September 2012 (Max and the Ghost)

At the drop-in center, Erika beamed at Max across the table, as he applied himself without complaint to the practice trigonometry exam that they had drawn up together during study hall. 

He couldn’t draw the triangles without thinking about the height as a depth, the depth of an unlighted shaft in a nineteenth-century factory, a bottomless pit that opened under an unobtrusive hole in a plank floor. Nonetheless he finished all of the problems, even the hard ones, as he turned over in the back of his mind how to tell the story to Erika. He understood why she liked this, now. It was a great deal simpler than the world with its ghosts and its tangle of stories and its family secrets.

He thought about it some more as she marked the exam.

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Six Sentence Sunday, 23 September 2012 (Leonie Hallward and the Secession of Greenwich Village)

“One infuses a bit of oneself in a good portrait.” 

Even if it were only the black kitten Merveille, in a beam of sunlight, and his shadow, quick India-ink shifting across the sunlit floor.

Basil smiled, and I watched the play of muscle and tendon in his hands as he absently twirled the head of his walking-stick. Basil had a strange way about him, man-about-town in his dress, until he got to the country, or the studio. Then there was quite a bit of the rumpled workman about him, a distant absent-mindedness, though I heard the grownups say that his society clients had the favor of his presence in respectable dress. But alone, in the country…

Among those sketches, the ones not sold, is a brief charcoal study of my nine-year-old self, notebook in hand, stalking Merveille as he stalked something invisible in the beam of sunlight. 

 

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A fresh start for autumn: preview of coming attractions

Except for my Six Sentence Sunday excerpts, I’ve been largely absent from my own blog this summer and early autumn. Behind the scenes, I’ve been working steadily, but little of it has shown up here, for a variety of reasons. I’m well, but caught in the hurricane of work. Some of it is writing, but most of it is revision, formatting, business planning, and of course the day job.

Here in Minnesota, the foliage along the Mississippi River bluffs is going to rust and gold, as the blue skies sharpen toward October blue and the clouds begin to take on their winter contours: lowering, amorphous, shadowed in steel-blue that threatens snow. In a week or so, I’ll begin work on the reading and character interviews for this year’s National Novel Writing Month project, Cleopatra’s Ironclads. This year’s novel will take me to sunny Alexandria, Egypt, in its glory days as a crossroads of culture and science in the century before the opening of the Common Era.

In the queue for this fall are four writer interviews:

  • In the Beta Bop series, an interview with my beta reader Sparrow, a poet working in Jerusalem. This interview took place in May of this year, and is my first trans-Atlantic GChat interview. We ranged over far more topics than beta-reading. The conversation lasted five hours and I will be posting additional parts as we move into October and November.
  • Wild Horses Gender Roundtable, in which TruantPony and BrainSister and I took a wild gallop through gender, biological determinism, romance tropes, and other exciting topics. I’m looking forward to editing and posting this one. The asynchronous nature of on-line chat made for a choppy transcript as three energetic and opinionated writers talked all at once.
  • Writing Community interview with Becca Patterson aka Mreauow, writing buddy and also one of the three Municipal Liaisons who facilitate the creative chaos that is National Novel Writing Month in the Minnesota-Twin Cities region, one of the most active NaNoWriMo regions in the world. She talks about her own experience as a NaNo novelist, as well as the collective experience of our lively Twin Cities writing community. This interview is coming in October, in time for prospective NaNoWriMo participants to think about whether this annual event might help this year’s projects-to-be.
  • Devin Harnois weighs in on publishing options in the new age of the e-book, what she looks for in a traditional publisher, and how she became an independently published writer. She provides resources for readers and writers alike who are interested in a backstage tour of the independent publishing movement, as well as the business end of publishing.

Thank you to all of my faithful readers who left comments inquiring about my health. I’m back, and looking forward to continuing the adventure with all of you!

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Six Sentence Sunday, 16 September 2012 (Max and the Ghost)

The night turned the floor-to-ceiling window into a mirror, but there was a shadow, or a shape, glimmering in it, more or less man-sized and –shaped, but not entirely distinct. 

Max blinked, and it was gone. He couldn’t tell if it had been on his side of the glass or not. 

He looked around. No, he was quite alone. The clock on the microwave oven read ten-fifteen: well past sundown.

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Six Sentence Sunday, 9 September 2012 (Max and the Ghost)

At the top of the vertical in this problem, the point P was an airplane in flight. 

An airplane in flight, high above the clouds—but the sky was empty. They weren’t in the flight path from the airport today. Cirrus streaked the patch of blue that he could see through the plate-glass front window of the cafe, over the red-brick storefronts. Those feathery strokes might be the fringe of a system whirling north to Duluth, and thence across the North Atlantic, through the shoals of icebergs to the dark gates of the Neva: to the city where his parents had grown up, years and miles from where he had been born.

Erika’s fingertip on his sleeve reminded him to come back to earth, and to subtract the poetry.

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Six Sentence Sunday, 26 August 2012 (Max and the Ghost)

“There’s something about that place that makes them nervous,” he said, and Erika frowned. “They got a deal. Anton usually likes to talk about his deals, but not this time.” 

Erika smirked. “Maybe there’s a body in the basement.” Her mother knew about things like that, being a cop.

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Six Sentence Sunday, 19 August 2012 (Max and the Ghost)

How Erika got from the yellow pad with its grubby pencil lines to the utmost stars and an ancient ship drifting on the infinite ocean, Max didn’t know, but it proved once again that they were brother and sister under the skin. Erika was a dreamer like him, just another sort. If the world held together, she wanted to be a civil engineer. Max knew that Erika’s mom was a cop, who wanted her daughter to do something a little less dangerous. Erika loved watching things being built, and trying to figure out how they were put together. 

It was the sort of dream that his parents wished he had, without saying so in so many words.

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Six Sentence Sunday, 12 August 2012 (Max and the Ghost)

As usual, Anton was abrupt with Max about his daydreaming and flitting and his blue hair, which was his friend Chloe’s term project for cosmetology school. She told him it had been quite a success, but Anton didn’t seem to think so. 

“I can’t tell sometimes if you’re a boy or a girl,” Anton said. 

Max bridled every time Anton said that. The tone implied there was something wrong with girls, and Max perfectly well knew there wasn’t. Most of his friends were girls: Erika and Chloe at school, and then Lelia from the bookstore who was a grownup but talked to him as if he were a real person, unlike Anton who talked to him as if he were a somewhat dim child. 

 

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