Writing Goals check-in

It’s a snowy Monday night, and I’m still recovering from National Novel Writing Month. I wrote 85K words of novel draft alongside an estimated 10-15K words of blog posts (posting every day adds up fast). So we’re looking at a likely 100,000 words written in November (certainly if I add in other nonfictional writing tasks). I think that’s where it starts getting real. It’s right at the edge of what I can pull off, physically and mentally, alongside a day job that demands my full attention when I’m there.

I’m still on track to be turning over my draft NaNo novel to my beta-readers by January 1. I’m still finishing it (at the much-reduced rate of 700-1000 words/day), but the holes to be filled in aren’t that large. Certain plot threads continue to flap loose in the wind, but they’d have done that if I’d finished on November 30. There’s just too much spontaneous generation in a novel written this fast. I’m working on the perfectionism, really I am.

When I finish the draft, I’m going to take out the knife and do some preliminary trimming, and then I’m going to write the Known Issues list that I keep in reserve to compare my ruthless first-pass assessment with the responses of the beta readers. What I’m learning is that my instincts are pretty good, but the second set of eyes is still necessary. Outside readers have found interesting patterns that completely eluded me, be it nice little thematic twists, or recurring imagery, or books that came to mind… in some cases, books I hadn’t read. I always learn from my beta readers.

Now for some more words, and then to bed.

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Six Sentence Sunday, 4 December 2011 (Annie Brown and the Superhero Blues)

She smiled back, a little tentatively, and said, “Hi.”

She ordered her usual: bittersweet mocha with skim milk. Iced, no whipped cream. She winced in anticipation of the expectable joke about her complexion. Northtown was very white, except for the multi-ethnic (and occasionally multi-species) enclave around the University.

He smiled, which made her stomach feel odd.  “Not too sweet. Much more interesting that way.”

She sternly told herself that it wasn’t flirtation, because she was a stocky dark girl with braids and heavy horn-rims, and she really did look the part of the engineering student she claimed to be.

[Annie’s first meeting with Bertie the Barista.]

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Revolutionary endgame, or some thoughts about Happy Ending

I’ve been thinking about the whole question of the Happily Ever Ending as I’ve been thinking out the ending of my NaNo novels, The Shape-shifter’s Tale (2010) and The Reincarnations of Miss Anne (2009, unfinished).  The 2010 NaNo was the first that I truly finished, not with a dreaded Technical Win, but with an actual ending, and a happy one: Christmas morning to the sound of artillery. The main characters have not only defeated the villain (by way of a strategic self-sacrifice of one of their own) but decisively changed the political landscape.

Now that’s my idea of an ending: not only do the characters change, but they’ve changed their world. It made me realize the reasons for my failure to finish Reincarnations, a novel with six viewpoint characters including a Citizen of Utopia: I had an inner fear of Going Too Far. That was a ridiculous fear given what I’d set up; I already had American slavery, Nazi-occupied Poland, scientific racism from the 1850s through the present day, and scientific fraud (with a backward nod to Cyril Burt et al), all of which were making the probability of Utopia diminish toward zero. Our Heroine was going to have to do something decisive and heroic in the opposite direction.

Which tells me why I’m not capable of standard romance: my idea of Happily Ever After involves more than two people, and my notion of romance is friendship plus sex plus solidarity.

In a word: revolutionary endgame.

 

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NaNoFeed, the Sequel: What makes it all worth while

Exhausted and speedy all at once, after two days away from the novel. As my buddy Devin Harnois puts it, “I want to take a nap and conquer the world.”

But tonight I went to our region’s TGIO (Thank God/Goodness It’s Over) party for National Novel Writing Month, and remembered why I like this so much. Highlights:

  • Hearing everybody’s weird plot points, and trying to one-up each other. “But my talking skull is the romantic lead!” (Yes, I actually said that. Though properly he doesn’t announce his romantic interest in Our Heroine until he has a body.)
  • Watching the younger generation pull off great things. There were the teenagers who’d done NaNoWriMo since they were 11, and then there was the first-time participant (age 6?) who needed to stand on a chair to read his story excerpt.
  • Food, and fun, and laughs, and all of us hamming it up reading our excerpts and realizing that we can do some pretty OK things on the first pass.
  • Gathering courage for the long march through revisions.
  • Exchanging screen names and requests for private messages so we can beta-read each other’s novels. I renewed my New Year’s Resolution to become the best possible editor of my own and other’s work.

Oh yes, and comparing notes on fight scenes. Fight scene in a bog is really tough. Someone will be eaten by the bog by the end of it.

(And that’s probably the last time for a while that I’ll get to use that tag, until I start researching and writing on that particular technical point.)

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NaNoFeed: Genre Trouble, part 1

As mentioned in yesterday’s post, I’m taking a little time off from my novel … well, at this point, a one-day break. Tomorrow, December 1, I start work again.

Last night I came home late and did what I hadn’t dared to do (or had time to do) all November: read my novel from beginning to end, more or less to ask the question: what is this thing?

I wasn’t sure about the answer. I’d defiantly subtitled it as “A Love Story,” and the storyline is a sweet romance between the principals, the Necromancer (a 35-year-old forensic artist) and the Barbarian (a 17-year-old resurrected Iron Age sacrifice). The background, of course, is made of disturbing, and intentionally so: the Necromancer is a Chernobyl downwinder who isn’t sure of her own life expectancy, and the Barbarian was done in by his own folk. The relationship is cross-cultural, cross-temporal and dramatically cross-generational, in what’s generally considered an unacceptable direction. Who is too young for whom? Elsa, the Necromancer, doesn’t look Northern European, but she’s as culturally German as I could make her; the Barbarian, on the other hand, looks the part but is very definitely not one of them.

It’s a first draft, with all the bagginess and non-existing pacing that implies. My first drafts generally lack dramatic conflict, even when I have a plot structure. I’m too busy writing it all down to be graceful about setting up the train wrecks. I’m not even in control of the cast list; characters sprang into being by spontaneous generation. I ended up with a nicely gothic subplot about Elsa’s philandering father. I did get to write the fight scene in the bog, which was nicely horrifying.

What genre is this? I don’t know, but I love the idea of a sweet romance made of disturbing ingredients, raising disquieting questions about time and mortality, racial and cultural identity, biological kin and families of affinity. Not to mention a critical look at the ways that people have lived with each other, or not, and attempted to rationalize their lack of control over the universe.

 

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NaNoFeed: a backward glance o’er traveled roads, or Quitting While Ahead

It’s November 29, and I’m done.

The story is not finished; in fact, the story has developed not only legs but a few other appendages (tentacles, perhaps?) and is wildly propagating in unanticipated directions. I’m not sure if the things I’ve written over the last few days have even made sense, but I have a framework, so at least they fit into some sort of picture of what a novel might look like. It’s more than a little scary, actually, but that’s the first draft: chaos and darkness over the waters.

My body is finished. The headache is more or less permanent, and I’m getting in to my bodyworker as soon as I can manage it. My eyes hurt; too much staring at tiny screen.

I pledged to my characters that I would not abandon them, and in particular, I have promised to keep up the pace of 2000-3000 words a day from December 1 until it’s done, and set myself a working deadline of December 15. That means I can expand the beast by as much as 30,000-45,000 words before calling it a day, and that might just be what it takes.

Meanwhile, I’m taking a break. I won. I used National Novel Writing Month for the purpose to which it was designed: breaking a new path in my work.

  • I posted to this blog every day, and I wrote fiction nearly every day.
  • I exceeded last year’s novel for level of structure, preparation, and length. I actually had a research budget.
  • I started a Twitter feed.
  • I checked out Scrivener, which does automatically what I’ve been doing by hand–kind of like FinalCut for novelists.
  • I spent money and time on research, as if a novel were a deadly serious business.
  • I fought the good fight against raving perfectionism.

Now my job is to kick back for two days, fiction-wise, and remember that I am something more than a story machine. The novel is sneaking up on me, though, and tugging my sleeve with little tendrils of plot. Soon (in two days) I’ll be visiting again.

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NaNoFeed: Necromancer and Barbarian (six-sentence excerpt: the midsummer party)

She dozed in the starlight with his head on her shoulder and his soft hair on her neck and breast; the scintillating sky stretched overhead and the year to come lay open at this hinge of the year, a book with empty pages illuminated in silver. The Milky Way arched above them, just at the edge of seeing, not as brilliant as at midwinter, and they argued about whether the colors they might be seeing were in fact the northern lights. Kirsten and Petra lay next to them, Petra’s long legs crooked at the knee and Kirsten lying in the curve of her body like a child, her head on Petra’s belly and the dark foam of her hair silvered in starlight. 

It was the shortest night of the year, and they slept but briefly, taking turns at the watch because the world was never as safe as it had been. At midnight, they leapt the bonfires. 

At dawn, they woke singing, and as the light grew, they gathered their things to make their way back to the city and the return of ordinary life.

From The Necromancer and the Barbarian: A Love Story (NaNo 2011): the summer-solstice idyll right before things get really hairy.

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Six Sentence Sunday, 27 November 2011 (Annie Brown and the Superhero Blues)

However, the policies were firm.

Bus your own dishes led the list, followed by No superheroics on premises, and Cross World Café bans guns on these premises, with a clarifying note below: “That means conventional firearms, directed-beam weapons, projectile weapons of all descriptions. Also: cross-bows, edged weapons of any description. Cross World Café is a Nuclear Free Zone.” Someone had written in, “Don’t forget magic wands.” Recently they’d had a wave of magic-wielders, since the old phone booths in the back had been replaced with a Name Unification Transit System (NUTS) Portal.

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NaNoFeed: The Necromancer and the Barbarian: A Love Story (six sentences)

I counted, and this is six sentences (of mine) but I didn’t feel like waiting for the next Six Sentence Sunday (I’m scheduled out through New Year’s) so here it is. The setting is Berlin, c. 2025, following the Great Change. Elsa’s mentor is describing an encounter in a Berlin hotel on the night of the full moon.

Under the unearthly light of the hotel bar, which was only neon and mirrors, a wizened old man in an eighteenth-century wig and a filthy military jacket argued with the barman. He was no ghost, for the smell was palpable. 

He was arguing about statecraft, in elegant and sarcastic French, though with a German accent.

Nor was he homeless, except in the sense that all full-moon travelers in Berlin were homeless: he had been Emperor of Prussia in his day, and had taken a royal liking to the cuisine, as well as to the barman’s touch with American cocktails. 

However, the barman told him, the patronage of Frederick the Great was no great favor, not only on account of the emperor’s personal habits, but his rather minimal notion of a proper tip. He did not look forward to full-moon nights.

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NaNoFeed: accidental flash fiction (“For once, there was no chaos”)

Author’s note: In preparation for NaNoWriMo 2009, someone put up daily prompts on one of the forums. I did them in the spirit of warm-ups, but some of them turned into stories. Here is one such.

Prompt (and title): For once, there was no chaos.

It was halfway through Act One that the sirens went off.  Good players all, we stayed in character and continued with our parts as the mechanical wolves howled at the hostile sky and the director stood in the wings with the stage manager and the two argued in soft hissing voices as to whether the show should go on under the circumstances.

We all knew that the shelter up the street had been hit by a missile in the last raid, killing who knows how many.  Casualty figures were not published.  We knew who had not turned up to work the next day, and why.

The orchestra continued to play, and we made our entrances and exits per stage directions, like the best of good soldiers.  For once there was no chaos.  We stood backstage waiting for our cues, the firemen stood on alert—stage candles now the least of their worries—and the stagehands stood ready to do what might have to be done if the roof came down.  Well, that was the choice, wasn’t it—the flimsy shelter up the street or the grand edifice of the State Opera House, which might collapse and entomb all of us.  We didn’t know for sure if they had aimed that missile for the shelter, but the Opera House showed up on aerial photographs and tourist guides.  It was not in the least a military target.

The music was splendid.  Never have I felt it so strongly, for all the counterpoint of howling air raid siren that turned Handel’s cadences into edgy modern dissonance.  We stood there in our glittering costumes, utterly silent, arms around each other in the wings, for all that some of us disliked each other in real life.  Eugenia, who was singing the magnificent female lead, that in the eighteenth century had belonged to a castrato, was perhaps my least favorite woman on the planet, but as she stood there waiting for her cue, her painted face faintly lit by the reflected light from the stage, I thought about how much I did not want her to die—least of all to die buried in broken rubble.  I’d been on enough salvage and rescue crews to know what that was, and what we were risking standing here playing our parts.

The audience sat silent—no, breathless—poised between life and death, as we were, in the place called Art.  The sirens howled on, then stopped.  For the moment, Handel was having the last word.  Eugenia stood in a flood of light, her elaborate headdress rocking slightly as her voice filled the house, throwing out branch after branch of song like a candelabra or the Tree of Life out of a prophet’s vision.  We heard the guns, and occasionally a high shriek that might have been something incoming, though legend has it that you don’t hear the one that gets you.

It was not until the third act that the all-clear sounded, and the show continued to go on, in a hush feathered by the winged passage of the Angel of Death.

(Process information: 10/25/2009 10:18 PM to 10:34 PM, 512 words, 16 minutes)

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