I walk the colonnade of the vast stadium, its staircases rising past the locked gates. Along the top runs a frieze in which the counties are carved, all ninety-eight of them, geography in alphabetical order. The colonnade curves, outsize, all the more so when I’m four-legged: loping as a dog—once as a wolf, too dangerous a form—or a cat, sliding through the shadows as the roof looms overhead. No one notices me. The air is full of news: sex and territory, the tang of urine and hormones, the enticing odors of possible food, furry and live, or fried and redolent of grease, in the leavings by the trash-cans. Squirrels, mice, the occasional rat—no, I don’t tangle with the rats, I’ve been a rat and I know what they’re about.
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Nice descriptions.
I love the sights and sounds and smells from the character’s POV – almost like I am there
Great description, and love the line about being a rat. 🙂
Nice descriptions.
Great descriptions, you pull me right in. Wonderful writing. Thank you.
Love the ‘air is filled with news’ line. Nice way to include smells 😉
Lyrical and powerful.
Makes me want to read more immediately.
I really like how you captured the animal-side POV here. That’s something often lacking in shape-shifter stories.
Wow, very awesome six. I felt like I was right there with the character experiencing what the character did, involving all senses. Great job!
I love the vividness of this.
I’m so glad to have discovered your writing. I not only enjoyed reading your six, I want to study it for craft. You’ve really succeeded in letting the reader see through the character’s eyes.
There’s fantastic depth in this snippet. We get the size of the coliseum, the wonderful instinctive animal brain of the shifter. You used description so effectively. Wonderful writing, EP!
Very descriptive six! Nice!
Amazing six – you really bring the feeling of being an animal right to our senses.
Great six. Descriptions are very real
GREAT use of the senses. You really got into the character’s head.
I love the moodiness of the voice. Really drew me in.
Unfortunately, I could actually *smell* the urine. Great six. I’m intrigued.
Vivid descriptions-wonder why it’s too dangerous to be a dog?
HOw interesting and your use of the senses is great
Fab descriptions, well done!