Six Sentence Sunday, 5 August 2012 (Max and the Ghost)

The next day, as he was leaving for school, mama told Max to invite one of his friends to their next Sunday dinner, as American families did on television.

Max thought about his friends: Thaddeus, with his loose curly Afro and his enameled nails and his eyeliner; Chloe with her dreadlocks and her pierced eyebrow; Peter and Francis, who were respectable and buttoned-down but all too plainly a couple, and they did come as a pair, which he knew his father and brothers would definitely not approve. Then there was Alan, with whom he’d had a rather fraught romance. Alan was at least as respectable as Peter or Francis, who were both business students at the U and wore suits and ties to class, and Max was, well, Max, with blue hair and a second-hand green-and-gold kimono from Ragstock (a woman’s kimono, Alan told him somewhat sniffily). 

Erika was the most respectable of the lot. She was an aspiring civil engineer and she helped him with trigonometry. 

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6 Responses to Six Sentence Sunday, 5 August 2012 (Max and the Ghost)

  1. Sue says:

    Interesting group of friends but American TV could be misleading. Is that Erika from your earlier work?

  2. I love the thought process–Hmm, let’s see now, which of my friends fits the idea of “friends” in my mother’s head? Who at least comes close, and in what way? Also, very fun to see the characters from Erika and the Vampire from Max’s perspective this time.

  3. J.M. Blackman says:

    I agree–his thought process is fun to listen to. He’s got a diverse group of friends and their description is great. This dinner seems like it’ll be very interesting.

  4. Elin Gregory says:

    Oh lord, decisions! They sound a lovely bunch to me but I can see how conservative parents might be a little alarmed.

  5. mreauow says:

    Oh the decisions of the young. How do I choose among all the unacceptable choices I’ve made to show my family. You’ve captured this perennial dilemma beautifully.

  6. Nice description of his friends as his parents would see them.

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