“This situation isn’t going away just because the Immortal is dead.”
Yasmin said, “I have put another piece in play. Taryn has agreed to speak for us to the Outposts. With your permission, Captains.”
“Oh no,” Jehen said, “with the permission of the whole Crew. We’re nobody’s navy. This is Sarronny Dome, and we’re going to get consensus on it. All hands on deck for a community meeting.”
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Excellent back and forth between the two characters. Nice snippet!
Nothing is going to be easy, it appears. Very crisp dialog. Enjoyed the excerpt!
Great dialog and pacing. Love it!
Hmm, I like that everybody gets a say. I like Jehen’s voice : )
This sounds exciting.