Weekend Writing Warriors: Sunday 21 December 2014 (NaNo 2014 WIP Romance with Rayguns)

Hernan hung backward over the edge of the sleeping-niche, queues sweeping the floor, his body anchored only by Taryn’s weight straddling him.

“Ah,” he said, “not sure about this position. Blood rushes to the head.”

“Well, at least it isn’t zero-gravity,” Taryn said, obligingly hauling him up, tangling her legs with his, and flipping him to side-lying. “I don’t know how many adolescents we have to reel in from hidey-holes in the zero-g districts, before they get good and sick. In pairs, mind you, because it’s got a reputation.”

“Sex in zero-g?”

“Overrated, like most things you’ve heard about.”

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From NaNo 2014, untitled romance with rayguns. In which Taryn and Hernan, my romantic leads, continue their passionate foxhole romance.

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Me and my pal the Inner Editor have a little chat

Last night I did an overflight of all the work I want to edit before New Year’s. I looked at common structural patterns and did a thinking-on-paper journal bout laying out what they are. Our old nemesis the inner Editor comes in for some bad press, but now that the first draft is down, I am making use of the Inner Editor in a useful way, by chatting with it. Here’s a sample transcript.
Inner Editor: You are a terrible writer.
Me: So what are my writerly vices?

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Apprenticing to be an Elder: a Cross-Generational, Cross-Cultural Gratitude Post

Over the last six years, I have been honored to mentor young people from across the globe, both in-person and on-line.

In turn, they have mentored me. Here are some examples:

  • The young man who rehearsed his talk about culturally appropriate pedagogy (from the standpoint of a Native child in White American public school). His talk made me remember the struggles I had with learning everything from tying my shoes to long division to martial arts moves. Everything we learn creates a shift in our holistic sense of the universe.
  • The young woman who introduced me to Kalia Kao Vang’s brilliant memoir  The Latehomecomer. The whole story is stunning (nonfiction and poetry are twins) but the opening chapter is an example to fiction and nonfiction writers alike about the marriage of spirituality, metaphysics, and history both familial and national.
  • The young people who brought me to the Winter Storytelling by the Ojibwe and Dakota language classes at the University of Minnesota, in spite of my shyness about buses/winter/not belonging there.
  • My protege who invited me to the fall Community Dance and set me up with a plate of food as if I were his grandma.
  • The young people with whom I conversed about science and philosophy in the Islamic world. (See the nonfiction history The House of Wisdom, in which we learn that grammar is a sacred undertaking, and translation one of the most glorious of the arts.)
  • The young woman who brainstormed her paper about Botox and racialized/gendered standards of beauty. I realized that I didn’t have an age 50 midlife crisis because I was surrounded by young people from cultures that revere their elders. Instead of worrying about my fading (White Hollywood defined) looks, I was taking lessons from the young in how to live up to the status of Elder.
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Book Reviews: Discoveries New & Old (Thelonius Legend’s Sins of the Father)

Saturday night, I read Sins of the Father by Thelonius Legend. It’s a first novel, and (to me) even more importantly, it’s a novel that’s a sibling of one I’ve been struggling to edit, Annie Brown and the Superhero Blues. I was cheered to discover that I was not alone, that my novel had kinfolk and a context. Continue reading

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Book Reviews: some notes in place of a manifesto

As various scandals have erupted in the SF/F and romance reviewing world over the last months, I’ve been (re) thinking what I believe about reviews.

In particular, I’ve been noticing that I read a lot of books, and I talk about books with friends and colleagues in person, on chat and email, and out on Twitter. So I may as well do it here.

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Weekend Writing Warriors: Sunday 14 December 2014 (NaNo 2014 WIP Romance with Rayguns)

“I’d really like to be much clearer on your cousin’s intentions in adopting Arna.”

“Martisset’s a reasonable person. I think you’ll like her.”

“Well, you seem to have a bit of a crush on her.”

“Proof positive she’s very much your sort. Though she was quite clear that she was spoken for, these decades, so no worries that she’s going to try to cut me out and run off with you.”

Taryn laughed aloud. “Every time I think I know where this conversation’s going, you take a hairpin turn.”

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From NaNo 2014, untitled romance with rayguns. In which Taryn and Hernan, my romantic leads, talk about Hernan’s cousin Martisset, who has rescued 12-year-old Arna from a shipwreck.

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Weekend Writing Warriors: Sunday 7 December 2014 (NaNo 2014 WIP Romance with Rayguns)

“Let’s eat before we discuss homicide.”

Taryn laughed. “Contemplating it is a lot easier before I’ve eaten, I’ll grant.”

“Then let me be sure you are always well fed,” Hernan said, “much as they say about beasts of prey.”

“The dismount is the difficult part. Advice to those who would ride the tiger.”

“Is that a proposition?”

“Not until I’ve had breakfast,” she said, and then they both laughed.

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From NaNo 2014, untitled romance with rayguns. In which Hernan and Taryn, my romantic leads, prepare to discuss ways and means over breakfast.

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Weekend Writing Warriors: Sunday 30 November 2014 (NaNo 2014 WIP Romance with Rayguns)

“From each according to her ability,” Taryn said, quoting some folk-wisdom that sounded vaguely familiar. “I’ll be frank, it was quite amazing watching you all. As if you were three parts of the same organism. Amazing. I wouldn’t have guessed that was your first time outside of a simulation.”

Timur sat down, abruptly. “Well, now that you put it that way, I think I’m going to go throw up.”

“Like going on a bender, without the fun of the actual intoxication,” Mattei said.

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Excerpt from one of my NaNo 2014 projects: untitled romance with ray guns.

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NaNoFeed: In the Wreckage of Folly (Excerpt with space archaeology!)

A colleague on Twitter, Lev Mirov (@thelionmachine) mentioned space archaeology. Which my NaNo 2014 project is full of… so here’s another excerpt, behind the cut because it’s lengthy.

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Weekend Writing Warriors: Sunday 23 November 2014 (NaNo 2014 WIP Romance with Rayguns)

“I hear you proposed to her clan-sister, but I assure you Yasmin is the true prize. You gave her a good run today, and she might just decide that she’ll think about clan-marriage again, or a proper fling amongst our own, though I suspect she’d be a bit rich for your blood after consorting with grubber-girls.”

Romantic interest in Yasmin Saiph yr Astok was the last thing from Hernan’s mind, but if he said so aloud he’d either insult someone or be taken as protesting too much.

“I hear she’s sublime in bed,” Iskandr said, “if a bit … ah, exacting. But so we all should be. Only the best for the best, eh?”

Hernan blinked again, and swallowed against a dry mouth. The Sarronny cadets might be quite forthright about matters of sex and the body generally, but they didn’t gossip about each other’s love lives nor speculate about private matters. Where that line lay between earthy and offensively bawdy, he wasn’t sure, but Iskandr had just plotted a point most decisively on the other side of it.

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Excerpt from one of my NaNo 2014 projects: untitled romance with ray guns.

Weekend Writing Warriors offers a selection of eight-sentence excerpts from many different writers. For the full selection, see here.

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