Weekend Writing Warriors: Sunday 17 March 2013 (Cleopatra’s Ironclads)

The sculptor came and went, taking notes with papyrus and memory as she assumed the ritual postures of the goddess, just as in the temple ritual, though with a few Greco-Roman twists—the knotted drapery for one, which was of a heavier drape than in the sun-baked temples on the Nile. He was a pleasant enough fellow, and she questioned him as well, on his knowledge of anatomy and the process by which drawings transmuted themselves to the full round. She’d been curious about that craft for some time, noting the difference between the statuary in the pure Egyptian tradition and the Hellenic fashion; the one was a sort of standing or walking hieroglyph, the sacred writing taking three dimensions and walking abroad, and the other pretended to ordinary life with the charge of the divine carried only in the allegorical appurtenances, so that an Athena might look only a formidable matron until you saw her owl, and a Dionysus a sturdy handsome fellow with a fine crop of curly hair, known as the god only by his bunch of grapes and his wild-animal skins.

Anubis, Thoth, or Horus, on the other hand, made themselves known as gods immediately.

He answered her questions, startled at first by them. A foreign queen, and an educated woman, were apparently exotic and fearsome curiosities to him. He talked of the grand tour he had done of the temples of Greece, the peristyles open to the sky and the great statues of the gods gleaming inside. He had not been to Egypt but understood that temple architecture there was on a very much larger scale.

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Julius Caesar commissioned a statue of Isis for the temple of Venus Genetrix (his divine ancestor). This excerpt, and next week’s as well, imagines Cleopatra’s conversation with the sculptor.

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Weekend Writing Warriors: Sunday 10 March 2013 (Cleopatra’s Ironclads)

Timaeus would stay behind to supervise the efforts of the experimental ship-design effort. 

“Automata, your majesty,” he said, shaking his head. “A child’s toy…”

“Can become a weapon. Aren’t the deadliest daggers the ones that look like little bijoux?”

He looked at her and smiled. Yes, she might be queen, but in his eyes she would always be the apt pupil of eleven, who was blooming into something formidable.

And that, in a way, was flattery in excess of anything the kings of the earth could provide in the way of ivory or gold or marriage-offers.

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Cleopatra is setting sail to Rome by invitation of Julius Caesar; Timaeus is her (fictional) tutor whom she has appointed to oversee the steam-technology initiative.

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Weekend Writing Warriors: Sunday 3 March 2013 (Cleopatra’s Ironclads)

“Your administration was notable for crisis, and cool-headed management of same. Quite a performance for a mere chit of a girl.”

“I was apprenticed for the role,” she said without heat. “And I had history as a guide. Let the looters and the profiteers run rampant in greater Egypt, and there’s riot. Watch it play out a few dozens of times, and the lesson’s taken without having to suffer it oneself.” She looked at him from under the lowering brow of the great wig with its burden of crown. “If one has the Great Library at one’s disposal and still manages to be a fool, then one doesn’t deserve to rule.”

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The first speaker is Julius Caesar. This is a lightly edited excerpt from Cleopatra’s Ironclads, my 2012 National Novel Writing Month project.

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Weekend Writing Warriors: Sunday 24 February 2013 (Necromancer & Barbarian character interview)

I dream of the green bog in summer, under the blue sky and the mist that shows in the distance even on a clear day. They’re like the eyes of the earth, reflecting the sky and its drifting clouds. One becomes confused about up and down, sky and water. No wonder our ancestors found them sacred places, criss-crossed them with plank roads, the better to reach the watery depths. 

The modern pathway is a sort of floating dock, a pontoon bridge that undulates with every step. I’ve long since stopped being disconcerted by it. I dream about crossing it by moonlight; I dream the sacrifices.

Ordinary dreams, too: I dreamed of Elsa Felix, black-haired and white-skinned under blue moonlight… in my bed.

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Genre Trouble: Acute vs Chronic (Notes from the Muse of Research)

Recently I was talking with an engineer-in-training about the leap from classroom theory to actual practice. It’s a gulf, and you jump hoping to make it; the blow is softened somewhat (but only somewhat) by moving some of the transition into simulation classes. There, the stakes are grades; in real life, it’s money and human lives.

Which brought me back to one of my favorite books, Ivor Kletz. What Went Wrong. On the subject of great titles, that one grabbed my attention when it appeared 5-10 years ago on the New Arrivals shelf at the library.

It’s a series of case studies of process plant disasters, on up to the Bhopal-Chernobyl level. I had just read the accident report from Chernobyl, which like many disasters was a man-made perfect storm, a confluence of hubris, flawed design, and just plain bad luck.

I’ve been thinking for some time about the kind of stories that mainstream American culture (and its publishing apparatus) honors. When the 35W bridge collapsed (more or less in my back yard), the news was full of pictures of firefighters and other first responders diving into the wreck. I thought: they cover this on the news, and our movies are full of crisis and rescue, but there are no thrilling dramas about prevention. Nearly every disaster of this sort is preceded by a quiet drumbeat of suppressed warnings; people risk their careers to warn of coming disaster, and like Cassandra of myth, are ignored. She came bearing prophecy; today she’d deploy an array of spreadsheets and would be about as well received. In America as other places, no good deed goes unpunished.

Acute versus chronic–that’s the question.

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Weekend Writing Warriors, 17 February 2012 (Necromancer & Barbarian character interview)

Something I miss: well, I could say that I miss my father, only because his going his disappearance spelled out for me so plainly what sort of world I lived in.  My mother missed him, and I was terrified. I miss the feeling of a world without fear. Fear has been a constant since I was nine years old. None of the old rules work any more, and the savants are feeling their way in the dark like the rest of us. There are ghost-painters and there are bone-talkers and there are shape-shifters and vampires and werewolves, particularly in the dead places, and the ones watered in human blood. The dead cities rise up and seek revenge, want to come back to life, which of course they cannot. 

If Berlin is so on the night of the full moon, I can only imagine Rome, or Jerusalem.

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Weekend Writing Warriors, 10 February 2012 (Necromancer & Barbarian character interview)

It is right that the gods be worshipped outside of any sort of enclosure. Temples and churches are idolatrous architecture: we are best with the original cathedral of the forest, with its irregular aisles and its roof crowned with the sky. Stone can only suggest the great canopy of the stars.

In the place of sacrifice, at the crisis or crux of the year, in the moment of the knife, that is the true place. That is the opening onto infinity, and that is the real place. “Favorite” is such a weak word for it, as if my individual will had anything to do with it. Beauty, too, that’s a weak word too, for what I want is something that means beauty and power and the awe we feel in the place of the sublime…

… that son et lumiere at the opening of Kirsten Felix’s Frankenstein, that conjures the northern wastes of the pole, yes, that’s what I mean. Caspar David Freidrich, of course: and that design so cleverly summons those pictures, without being literal about it… and it’s Petra Miller’s design, of course, but even a half-breed can get something right, if it’s so obviously in the air.

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Six Sentence Sunday, 3 February 2013 (Necromancer & Barbarian character interview)

Elsa Felix… I turn the name over and over in my name. Elsa the Lucky, if I read that name aright. Well there’s luck and there’s luck. If her blood opens the door to the world as it should be… perhaps not merely the world that was, but the world of the Old Gods. I don’t know if Ragnarok was a prophecy or an addendum by the triumphant religion. And so the old gods died… well, I will bring them back.

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This week’s excerpt is from the villain’s interview for The Necromancer and the Barbarian: A Love Story.

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The real face of evil looks a lot like a garden slug, or why J. R. R. Tolkien kept the Big Bad off stage

I’m two-thirds of the way through The Two Towers, where the point-of-view swings back to Tolkien’s unlikely hobbit-hero Frodo and his faithful sidekick Sam, several days into some seriously uninviting territory. There’s a lot of rather foreboding and on occasion actively hostile landscape in this book. To date, my favorite is the malignant forest that rearranges its collective roots to make travelers lose their way. The minions of evil, the faceless Black Riders, have put in cameo appearances but more often they’re told. Thus far, the real Big Bads are safely off-stage.

Nobody gives Tolkien the chops he deserves as a suspense writer. I know how it turns out (having been strong-armed into seeing the movies) but that doesn’t matter; the setting and the hints are keeping me on edge. As is well known, the Nameless Horrors in the Back of the Fridge are way scarier than the expired pickles with the fuzz on them but the label on the jar still intact. (H. P. Lovecraft didn’t write about expired foodstuffs, but he could have. And by the way, mycologically speaking, it’s not the shapeless veggies themselves but the grainy black fungus on them that’s worrying … )

Writing evil is a tricky business. The medieval theologians were right on this one; it’s pure sucking void walking around tits out, but that’s a rather difficult thing to draw. We know it when we see it (or hear it), and these days it’s wearing a crisp suit or hipster drag or the electronic carnival-mask of the internets. It loves cliches, and the dialogue is usually more Dilbert than Dante. Most real-life villains conspicuously lack personality. Zoom in on historical Big Bads, like Hitler & co, and you discover a bunch of tedious yahoos in tacky suits boring the hell out of their dinner guests with racist screeds and anecdotes about their dog.

And large-scale evil, the smash-and-grab, fire-and-sword kind, imperial genocide with a side order of cultural obliteration, is organized and energetic laziness. Co-operation takes some brains and effort. Zonk ’em on the head and take their stuff? That’s easy.

When I think about the Seven Deadly Sins these days, Sloth is the one out front with the screaming electric guitar. The rest of them are backup singers.

So J. R. R. Tolkien is one smart writer, because I have the suspicion that if Sauron got serious screen time, he’d be boring us with Evil Wizard anecdotes.

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Six Sentence Sunday, 27 January 2013 (Necromancer and Barbarian character interview)

I don’t have those moments when I’m about the work but in odd times between, when something rears up from the depths to remind me of my secret life: a pulse of fear, and then I remind myself that it’s breakfast (or lack thereof) talking, or sleep deprivation, too much coffee or not enough, or the lack of a cigarette.

If I could quit smoking… well, I’m down to five cigarettes a day. It definitely isn’t a habit that comports with ancient virtue… or ancient vice either. They’d have done opium, perhaps, or hashish, but not tobacco, because that’s an import from the New World. And even the ancient Americans didn’t do it the way we do it, concentrated and in industrial doses, daily. We take that which was a sacrament and turn it into a quotidian vice.

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The work in question: realistic re-enactment of Iron Age human sacrifice. The speaker: the serial killer in The Necromancer and the Barbarian: A Love Story.

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