Apprenticing with the Dead: A Strong Dose of Truth (James Baldwin)

The last time that I read James Baldwin’s collected essays (in the Library of America edition) was 2006, on a road trip from Minneapolis to Cleveland to see my mentor, who was active in the civil rights movement and had put Baldwin on the list of African-American Writers You Absolutely Must Read. (It’s a very long list.)

It’s about time that I took up that collection again, but here are the things I remember from the last go-round.

The collection spans Baldwin’s entire career, and I watched his essayist’s voice evolve from addressing a ‘we’ that was white, male, and well-to-do (the presumed audience for literary or political commentary in the 1940s) to personal, lively, and culturally specific. That evolution parallels major changes in American culture, as the civil rights movements of the 1950s through the 1970s brought forth voices from one previously suppressed community after another.

In a single lightning stroke that illuminated my entire family history, Baldwin spoke of the “epic lies we [Americans] tell about our ancestors.” All of the not-quite-rightness I had sensed in family stories, particularly on my father’s side, dropped into place.

He wrote about being asked the same question over and over again, as urban riots became an annual occurrence in the ghettoes of American cities in the 1950s and 1960s: ‘Why are Negroes so angry?’ Which has been updated, on every occasion of protest violent or nonviolent, ‘What do Those People want, anyway?’ Some things have changed — not at all.

In ‘The Price of the Ticket’ he wrote about the devil’s bargain given to European immigrants: abandon your original culture in order to receive the imprimatur of Whiteness. There is a hungry-ghost aspect to Euro-American culture, that constantly seeks far from home, but fears lest it look insufficiently White. Baldwin wrote about the joy of community dancing in Harlem clubs, as compared to what he saw uptown.

I remembered being six years old and being told that my love of bright colors — pink and purple, peacock and ultramarine and kelly-green — was dubious, or questionable … and finally figured out, years later, that they meant it was Colored. My father had deep uneasiness about being White enough … even though on the face of it he was Irish and Scots-Irish, with the permissibly exotic addition of a dash of Oklahoma Cherokee.

Years later, when I saw a photograph of J. Edgar Hoover as a young man, I thought of my father: that wavy dark hair, broad nose, and complexion that turned olive in the summer sun. Hoover was Passing. I am now virtually certain that at least Someone in my family tree Passed as well, and I can well imagine the fear that pursued them down the years given what it was to be other than White in the halcyon days of American apartheid.

I want to live in a country where one does not have to Pass in order to qualify as a human being.

James Baldwin, years after his own death, transmitted to me, through the lightning-strokes of his own ruthless prose, a strong dose of truth about what it meant to be an American writer. He asked troubling questions, and left me to answer them. I didn’t always agree with him — for one, on his estimate of Uncle Tom’s Cabin and so-called ‘protest literature’ generally — but he is one of the dead with whom I have apprenticed. In the literary descent, he and I are both grandchildren of George Sand, via the Dostoevsky connection. I remember to this day Baldwin’s comment that Dostoevsky’s Petersburg poor folk did not read to him as White, but reminded him of his friends and neighbors in Harlem. There are powerful affinities between the Russian and African-American literary traditions, and it’s an interesting sidelight indeed on our literary culture that I came to the artists of Harlem via Petersburg and Moscow.

Finally, I’m posting this essay today, on Martin Luther King Day, because Baldwin’s portrait of King, the view of a contemporary, is so far from the sanitized National Saint that it bears re-reading. Dr. King was a man steadfast in his convictions, who challenged the injustice of his day — and ours — and refused to prostitute spiritual practice to the purpose of keeping ‘order.’ Watching the portrait of this soft-spoken warrior for peace and justice emerge from the notes of a contemporary gave me a sense that such people do not belong only to ages past. Martin Luther King, Jr. was a real human being, with all the failures and flaws of an ordinary mortal, who learned courage in practicing it. His moral stature is attainable by those who strive for it with a single heart.

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Six Sentence Sunday, 20 January 2013 (Annie Brown and the Superhero Blues)

“Ooh, your cutie’s on duty.” Rafe smirked, and Annie shushed him. Not that you could hide stuff like that from Rafe, because he had a supernaturally sharp eye for love drama. And she’d been fool enough to tell him, but didn’t you tell your almost-brother these things anyway? 

Bertie the barista must have heard, because he tipped her a slow, solemn wink. 

Rafe nudged her. “See, he likes you too.” 

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This month’s Six Sentence Sunday excerpts come from books that will be revised and released in calendar year 2013.

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Apprenticing with the Dead: Reading Tolkien 35 Years Late

When I was in high school in the late 1970s, everybody was reading Tolkien’s Lord of the Rings trilogy. I resisted, for reasons I didn’t fully understand at the time.

I think if you’d asked me then, I would have said that I was uneasy with the simple black-and-white, Good vs. Evil setup. Good is Us and Evil is Them, and it seemed an actively dangerous way to think about it. As a student of medieval philosophy, I understood that Evil was a tricky business not of presence but absence. Not to mention the racial overtones, which others abler than I have unpacked at length, and the sex-stereotyping by the overwhelmingly male cohort of 1970s sword-and-sorcery writers.

Then there was the role-playing game Dungeons and Dragons, which I met in passing in college, and found rather uninteresting as storytelling. At 12, I might have found it enchanting, but by 17, I had been thoroughly infected by a combination of Russian novelists and American New Wave science-fiction writers. I had acquired a taste for complexity — the more the better — and demanded a substantial dose of philosophy with my literature.

Over the course of decades, I found my way to the writing of fantasy, but by a very different route. In 1998, I saw Marcie Rendon‘s play Songcatcher (available in this anthology) which drove home for me what ghosts are: nothing more or less than the persistently unresolved past, both individual and collective. The dead are very much with us, in the consequences of their actions.

Behind that supernatural setup, the play was based upon solid research — in fact, it was produced at the Minnesota History Theater,  which specializes in same. ‘Tell all the truth, but tell it slant,’ as Emily Dickinson put it. History need not be told as pageant or as realist drama; there are other, more direct roads to apprehension of truth: fantasy and humor. Rendon’s other work ranges from children’s books to salty satire about the for-profit appropriation of Native American spirituality.

In the line of major influences, I would mention Toni Morrison’s Beloved (most indubitably a ghost story) and Octavia Butler’s Parable of the Sower (a dystopic epic set in a future rooted in the current Californian landscape), Andrei Bely’s Petersburg (a tip-tilted phantasmagoric portrait of a capital city on the verge of revolution) and Leslie Marmon Silko’s Ceremony, which begins with creation, then a bet between rival sorcerers, before opening onto the internal landscape of a Native American veteran come home from Japanese captivity in WWII.

Every few years, I reread Petersburg and Ceremony. Those terrifying landscapes reassure that me that what I feel moving under my feet is real. Any landscape is four-dimensional. The past is a character. “Dead is dead, but dead is not done,” as Gertrude Stein put it in The Making of Americans. At every scale — individual, family, language, nationality, city — we are born into trouble that someone else made in their time.

Which brings me back to Tolkien, and my experience of reading him now, thirty-five years late.

Tolkien’s academic training and practice was in linguistics. His world-building draws on the English landscape and the roots of the English language as it evolved in England. He is as deeply rooted in his language and culture as it is possible for a writer to be. His geography is well-realized and I am reading the book without resort to the maps with little or no confusion. (Certainly I draw maps and timelines when I world-build, but the reader should not require them.)

It’s not to say that American writers should only write American landscapes, but they should question the urge to foreign travel. Many of Tolkien’s 1970s sword-and-sorcery imitators are American, and I read, in all of this harking-back to some ill-conceived pseudo-medieval society, a disinclination to look too closely at our own history.  Truth does not live only in special places Elsewhere, whether on the arid escarpments of the Sinai Peninsula, under a fig tree in India three centuries before the Common Era, or in the green and pleasant land of Tolkien’s Middle-earth. One can receive revelations in Upper Midwestern thunderstorms.

Like Rendon, Butler, Morrison, and Silko, I find my richest sources in matters both American and nonfictional, and I expect I will still be drawing up water from that well for years to come. The thirty-five year delay has allowed me to read Tolkien as a colleague, but by no means a model to be imitated slavishly.

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Six Sentence Sunday, 13 January 2013 (The Shape-shifter’s Tale)

I reminded Trevor how he had kneaded the muscles of my neck and shoulders back to something like calm, that first night that I arrived.

He said, yes, he’d thought of doing that for a living, and Emma had suggested it when he first arrived, before it became clear that an English refugee, especially from that part of the North, would be suspect.

She thought it would be best if he took a job as far as possible away from his natural inclinations.

His natural inclinations were to heal and to make, so they would not look for him in a place that disassembled things that were dead, though you could feel the unfinished business in them, like Emma’s cadavers and weathered bones. Which they were, he supposed: death by violence left more than one sort of mark. He only knew that a day at work left him jangled and edgy, and making things made a difference.

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This month’s Six Sentence Sunday excerpts come from books that will be revised and released in calendar year 2013. The excerpt above from The Shape-shifter’s Tale is new material written in mid-2011.

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Six Sentence Sunday, 6 January 2013 (The Lost Pissarro)

New York in the summer time. New York under a blazing sun that seemed to have transported itself from the New Mexico desert. New York broiled in a heat wave that reminded her of a glassmaker’s kiln. Waves of heat made the foreshortened crowds on Fifth Avenue waver in the distance, as if they were a mirage on the hoof. The lions at the New York Public Library looked up as she passed, and gave her an acknowledging wink. We’re neither one nor the other, they said: neither stone nor flesh. 

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Six Sentence Sunday excerpts in January will feature works that will be published in 2013. Above are the opening lines of The Lost Pissarro.

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Writer Interview: The Next Big Thing (I’m the interviewee this time)

I’ve been tagged twice now for The Next Big Thing, by J. M. Blackman and Devin Harnois, so in honor of the new year and all, here goes. Watch this spot for an update on the next blogs I’m linking to for the interview challenge, since I have been  hibernating for the last two weeks and am behind on all of my correspondence.

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What is your working title of your book?
Annie Brown and the Superhero Blues

Where did the idea come from for the book?
In summer 2011, Samhain Publishing issued a special call for superhero romance. I learned about them because my writing colleague Devin Harnois had published with them and spoke well of their professionalism and contract terms. I decided to go for it and try my first ever write-edit-submit marathon. Essentially the zero draft was written in under a month, edited to first draft in a week, and submitted. It got rejected, because (a) the front end needed some work (opening’s my classic weakness) and (b) I fail at writing standard romance.

What genre does your book fall under?
Superhero Comedy-Adventure, if that’s a genre. I suppose contemporary fantasy would cover it, though as one of my beta-readers, BrainSister, pointed out, it shares thematic territory with Young Adult (coming-of-age and sorting out family relationships) even if the main characters are college-age.

Which actors would you choose to play your characters in a movie rendition?
Actually, given current Hollywood practice of 70-80% white male leading characters and White-only casting calls, I think it unlikely that Annie Brown would be on anybody’s radar. (The only characters identified as White in this story are the exotic cross-cultural love interest, Bertie the Barista, who is English, and the celebrity Bad Girl, Courtney Bland, who is American. Oh yeah, and some minor corporate Supervillains.) I would want any casting director to respect the ethnicities and appearances of the characters as written: Annie is basically an African-American geek girl who’s also a superhero. She’s stocky and wears glasses and is most emphatically not a supermodel type.

What is the one-sentence synopsis of your book?
Geek-girl superhero Annie Brown takes on parental expectations, star-crossed crushes, and Evil Incorporated her own way.

Will your book be self-published or represented by an agency?
This book will be independently published by Glass Knife Press. I have zero call for an agent at this point. For contract negotiations, I engage an intellectual property attorney.

How long did it take you to write the first draft of your manuscript?
About three weeks, with an additional week for first-pass revisions. I am picking it up now for revisions prior to publication. The original manuscript is about 30,000 words. To judge from past practice, I’ll be moving pieces of backstory around and adding scenes where previously I had narrative summary. It opens with a family argument and I want to make the most of that.

What other books would you compare this story to within your genre?
Oh man, given my genre confusion, I’m not sure. The only influence I was aware of was the deadpan goofballery of the world-building, which is influenced by J. K. Rowling’s Harry Potter series, and the set design, which is straight out of The Steampunk Bible.

Who or what inspired you to write this book?
I wanted to write a superhero with common sense; immediately the character who popped into mind was a second-generation African-American superhero, who has about two or three layers of culture clash with the Superhero Establishment. I still remember when they first had black superheroes in the 1970s, when last I was reading comics, and you could just feel how squicky the whiteboy majority felt about having their clubhouse invaded. The sixties and seventies only opened the campaign for inclusion; the fight for equal recognition (read “human being status”) for people of color, women, LGBTQ is still going on in comics, games, and popular media generally. And the vigilante-hothead subtext of the superhero as American myth is really interesting and problematic, so yeah—a nice big mine-field to tap-dance through.

The drafting process was pretty much a dare, per usual, because I get way better stuff when I write fast enough to get out of my own way. It was the first time I proposed the Lost Weekend Novella (30,000 words in three days). I also set myself the challenge of being as derivative as possible without writing out-and-out fan-fiction, so the plotting and setup is Shakespearean comedy, the cameo monster is from Lovecraft, and about half the costuming is from the Steampunk Bible, comic books, or 70s-80s TV science fiction shows; I’ve laced the thing with more pop-culture references than I usually do. Annie herself took shape spontaneously so I suspect she is a child of the Muse of Real Life. And then of course, there’s the usual Beaumont Challenge: throw in everything but the kitchen sink, and see what coalesces out of primal chaos.

What else about your book might pique the reader’s interest?
The original challenge said the romance could be M/F, M/M, or F/F. So I said, “goody! I’ll take one of each!” There’s an AU take on the Civil Rights Movement and Black Power, a huge universe with aliens who are not necessarily out to get us, steampunk wizard kids from another dimension, and the multi-cultural (indeed multi-species) geeks of Intergalactic Forensics.

I generated a whole universe full of possibility and had a ball doing it. So once I’ve edited this into a shapely form, I think that readers will enjoy it.

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Six Sentence Sunday, 30 December 2012 (The Necromancer and the Barbarian: A Love Story)

There was silence from Little Bird, though she still felt his listening presence. There was too much to explain there: how many wars, alone, stood between his time and hers? The Roman legions were as yet the echo-shock of rumor, on the other side of the Rhine, and he had grown up among his own folk. 

And then there was the Empire to the south, and the German tribes along its frontiers, and the kings, and the Vikings, the longboats and the cathedrals, the Crusades and the spice trade and the trading cities of the Hanseatic League, the cod fisheries of the North Atlantic, the ring of islands whose southern verge one could follow to the New World; there was the coming of Christianity and the upsurge of Islam and the diasporas, the Armenians and the Jews and the children of Africa borne off by the slave trade, and the cities swallowed by desert along the Silk Road…

… well, rather a lot had happened since Little Bird had been laid to rest in the bog.

My mother is dead, he said. And that was the beginning of the end.

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A backward look before I begin revisions: The Necromancer and the Barbarian: A Love Story was my NaNo novel for 2011, finished in February 2012.

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Six Sentence Sunday, 23 December 2012 (Cleopatra’s Ironclads)

The beautiful rowers, all in unison, beat in rhythm with the drums, with her own heart, with the turning of the stars overhead, as the temple dancers in their clockwork splendor played out the tale of Isis and Osiris, and the battle of the automata, and the resurrection of the beloved husband who must go down once more into the dark. Caesarion—for so she still called him in private, as did the Alexandrians, now more in reverence than jest—accompanied her in the headdress of Horus, child of the sun, with his falcon headdress. Overhead the mechanical falcons circled, spreading wide their wings and gliding on silk sails. That was another project, particularly beloved of the artificer-queen. 

They might soar, might be like unto gods—

–though only mortal, only mortal. Remember that you too must die, she whispered, under the golden mask of her triumph.

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Writer Interview: Angela Quarles

Angela Quarles writes romance with a fantasy twist. I first met her through Six Sentence Sunday and fell in love with the snippets from her steampunk novel Must Love Breeches, set in the early decades of the nineteenth century. One of the delights of that novel is the appearance of geek girls both contemporary and nineteenth-century. Her first release, Beer and Groping in Las Vegas, introduces magic into a contemporary romantic comedy complete with nerdtastic repartee.

You write a lot of culturally and regionally specific characters, and your work’s full of popular culture references. Could you talk about role of regional culture and pop subcultures in Beer and Groping?

Great question! I’d say pop subculture plays a larger role in this one than the regional culture. I think this story was my chance to really play in a way I haven’t been able to before, because up to then I’d written historicals, so I went a bit wild. The title came to me first, and so the setting had to be Vegas, and since I knew it was going to be a short story, I wanted to focus on just one 24-hour period. For some reason I thought it would be fun to explore someone who outwardly is not your typical geek, and I came up with the tagline ‘a geek trapped in a good ole boy’s body’ before I started writing. Then it seemed natural to have a sci-fi convention at the hotel where the story takes place. Having this as a backdrop fit in nicely with their characters and gave me a chance to hint at a down-the-rabbit-hole type of story in the opening.

I don’t know that it’s a conscious thing on my part, though, to write regionally specific characters, but you’re right, I do. I guess it feels most natural to me. In this story I wanted to pay a little homage to Finland since I was an exchange student there, and so I picked a heavily Finnish-American region for the heroine and a Finnish name. For the hero, it was a nod to Virginia, a state I’ve never lived in, but have deep family roots there.

I love the supernatural as a plot driver. How you integrate the supernatural and the ordinary in your work? What’s the charm of supernatural/paranormal stories for you, against straight historical or contemporary romance? 

I think for most of my stories, it’s a chance to explore something just a little out of the ordinary—a ‘What If’ that can’t actually happen in real life. Usually, though, it’s a little dabble that is inserted into the normal world, but has big consequences. In my time travel romance, Must Love Breeches, it’s a wish made on a calling card case that brings her back in time, but then that’s it as far as paranormal events. With Beer, it’s an accidental wish made with a djinn, and except for little things they notice during the story, it takes place in our normal world.

One of the things that drew me when I beta-read Must Love Breeches was the way that you played very specific characterization against romance roles and tropes. How do your characters show up? How do you develop them?

I don’t even know if I was aware that I did that, LOL! Honestly, it’s been different with every story. With Breeches, I had the basic premise in mind and an idea of who the hero and heroine were, but I pantsed the first draft, learning those characters as I wrote them. Of course, that meant extensive rewriting to make sure that their characterizations were consistent, once I had a handle on them. The hero and heroine in Beer I had a better understanding of their goals and motivations before that first draft, though I did need to revise hers a bit in revision to make it stronger.

For my steampunk romance, Steam Me Up, Rawley, I experimented with pre-plotting as much as I could and found that I really like doing that. I brainstormed and let them kick around in my head for at least a month or more, fine-tuning their goals, motivations and conflicts and how it would affect the plot. This time, during revision, it was the hero who ended up with a weaker motivation, so he needs some more ‘beefing up’. I ended up doing some character interviews with him to find out what made him tick.

In my latest, which isn’t quite finished, it’s a meta fiction romance called Not Another Darcy, and again I worked on the characters before I got too far along in the writing. I think of all my projects, I had a better grip on the characters and what made them tick before I wrote the first draft. I did some free-writing in my journal and just did series of what-ifs, writing down whatever popped into my head. I wrote out ideas and explorations about each character in that same journal, trying to discover what made them tick, what their backstory was, etc. I find that I need to actually be writing to do this kind of exploration, so instead of doing it in the first draft (and then have more revisions just for that) I wrote in my journal. Then once I’d done that for awhile, I got out a character sheet for each and collated what I’d discovered into one spot, discarding what didn’t work, so that in the end, in my project notebook for the WIP, I had the ‘final’ picture of who they were, instead of having it scattered throughout my journal along with explorations that ended up nowhere.

Please talk as much as you want about the glories of geek romance!

LOL, well, there’s lots to choose from, surprisingly. Vicki Lewis Thompson has a whole Nerd series, starting with Nerd In Shining Armor. And surprisingly, there’s even an erotic romance wherein the hero is literally a rocket scientist— Del Dryden’s The Theory of Attraction. Someone even made a Goodreads listopia list called Nerdgasms. I think what makes them so appealing is the vulnerability of the geek. They’re very focused and into whatever subject/career they’re a geek about and can tend to get used to people zoning out on them. They love and want to find love too, and it’s scary for anyone to jump into that state of being, but I think it’s appealing seeing someone like this let their geek flag fly and still have it happen. It’s fun to experience it with them.

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Beer and Groping in Las Vegas is for sale here. Check out the book trailer here. You can follow Angela at her blog, Twitter, Shelfari, and Goodreads.

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Six Sentence Sunday, 16 December 2012 (Cleopatra’s Ironclads)

The regalia of Isis, Mother of Steam, was heavy indeed, with its crown of gears and twin stacks, a visual pun on the traditional headdress. Gods were shape-shifters, after all, and the Great Mother was no different in that respect. It took some help, and a great deal of stage-managing, for a a woman of seventy to bear that weight as if she were a girl of seventeen. 

The trumpets blared, and the hard blue sky swallowed them, the sun flashing off the instruments of the mechanical orchestra, as the great doors opened on their hydraulic hinges and the veil of smoke parted to reveal the Incarnate Isis, bearing her instruments of office. 

She counted her own heartbeats, and they slowed: odd that paying attention to something made it slow. Her heart was rowing her forward in time, toward her own rendezvous with the Fates.

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