NaNoFeed (excerpt): first crash of the school year (CW: DEATH)

The first crash of the school year interrupts breakfast conversation. Content warning: death by small aircraft crash (offstage) Continue reading

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Weekend Writing Warriors: Sunday 8 November 2015 (WIP: Ship’s Heart)

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Mavra cycled them through the major teams under the Dome, now that they’d passed adulthood rites.

In power systems, they tied their hair up close to their heads. The adult crew had shaved their heads for the most part, because you didn’t want to take the chance of anything brushing up or getting caught in the machinery. They suited up for the dangerous work in the partitions, where the conduits ran through the original domes into the folly of Dome Seven, which was now a huge wound at the center of the whole complex, forever compromising the integrity of a Dome that would have to hold against an atmosphere that would never be breathable.

Comms, which they’d already worked, now they learned in its various layers: the routine conversations with the satellite and transfer station AIs, the weather-tracking, the maintenance checks in the places they couldn’t reach.

Transport included the spaceport and the rail lines; they also maintained the windbreaks. Here for the first time they suited up for the actual atmosphere of Sarronny world. The world outside the windbreak was not a place for untried youths, so Mavra took them through simulations until they could do it in their sleep, till they had the suit-checks memorized like any of the other safety dances that were ordinary gesture now.

 

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NaNoFeed: Ship’s Heart excerpt (major life changes, plus hair)

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This year’s National Novel Writing Month challenge is “Finish All The Things.” My 2015 flagship project is Ship’s Heart, the first book of the trilogy whose middle act I wrote in 2013 (Inside the Jump).

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Yasmin remembered the day they announced the draft to the Academy. It was the day her mother Sita transferred to the power crew. That was the first announcement.

Well, the way it really happened: Continue reading

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NaNoFeed: Concept cover, banner, and a first excerpt!

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This year’s National Novel Writing Month challenge is “Finish All The Things.” My 2015 flagship project is Ship’s Heart, the first book of the trilogy whose middle act I wrote in 2013 (Inside the Jump).

2013-10-25 ShipsHeartThe novel has existed in outline since April 2014, but it’s only now that words are coming out fast. I’ve worked on it from time to time, but the only words I’ll be counting are the ones I write in November.

Here’s a preliminary excerpt. More will be coming!

 

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Weekend Writing Warriors: Sunday 31 October 2015 (WIP: Ship’s Heart, character interview)

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Martisset nodded approvingly when she saw what I took out of my pockets.

“You provision like a mountaineer,” she said, with that funny crooked smile. She hefted the canteen. “That will keep you for a day, if you’re taking full rations, longer if you’re stretching it out.”

She turned slightly and looked at something distant, as her long pale fingers traced the Academy sigil on the side of the canteen. “If you don’t provision, you’re in trouble, especially in spring. Fresh snowmelt isn’t so bad, but once it’s on the ground for very long … running water looks drinkable, but it isn’t. Sometimes people forget that.”

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Weekend Writing Warriors: Sunday 25 October 2015 (WIP: Ship’s Heart)

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Yasmin glared up at the banner of the Hydrological Trinity above the Library archway. Those gods boasted the wealth of the Mother of Worlds: cloud-wreathed, water-wrapped, a gift of pure grace.

People on Karis forgot fate’s generosity when it came to the step-children however many times removed.

Of course she and all the other step-children descended from the journey-ships. Everyone descended from the journey-ships. Karis and Inner Colonies and Outer Colonies, the Dome and the Outposts, all of them were cousins. Everybody knew that.

The ones who’d conveniently forgotten sat on most of the wealth in the Inhabited Worlds.

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Weekend Writing Warriors: Sunday 18 October 2015 (WIP: Ship’s Heart)

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Mavra had warned them …

Jehen’s breath caught sometimes when she realized she might not ever see Mavra again–not for years, anyway. If she and Yasmin and Ferenc fulfilled their duty, they’d be Aboard-Ships for life. At some point in the future, they might be crew on a Ship putting into Sarronny orbit for the annual supply run, but that would not be the same as coming home. They would be glamorous strangers visiting to bring necessities, dance in the community circle once more, and bear away with them the child-tribute.

The hairs went up on the back of her neck, much as they did when she thought about the mathematics of the Jump.

Were it not for the Jumps, major and minor, right now she’d be insuperably far from home. Time on the evolutionary or even the geologic scale would separate her from everything she’d known.

 

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Weekend Writing Warriors: Sunday 11 October 2015 (WIP: Ship’s Heart)

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The afternoon passed overhead, with bird-cries and strokes of white cloud; Jehen was only distantly aware of time passing as she wrestled with docking simulations, as she thought about the curious behavior of things in zero gravity.

The distinction between docking and ramming was a matter of velocity.

She closed her eyes to think about the sequence of locks: first the outer, then the inner, then the coupling of doors, the re-pressurization of the place between, the test sequence for the boarding-passage.

Yasmin and Ferenc trooped back in, arguing about something. She could hear them outside the door, but not their words, until the door opened and Ferenc said to Yasmin, “She won’t like it. We should have just told them she forbade it.”

Jehen sat up and put her work to one side.

“So, they said all right, you could come too,” Ferenc said, all at a run as if he wished to be done saying it as soon as humanly possible.

 

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NaNoFeed: Some unconventional advice for #NaNoPrep

This November, I’ll be doing the National Novel Writing Month challenge for the eighth time. Each year, the challenge gives new opportunity to deepen writing practice.

I’m still in grief-and-rage at the decades-too-early death of my mentor, so I have not been in the best shape in the last months.

This year, I am concentrating on self-care and letting the work find its own pace. In a year and a half as an independent writer, I have been in recovery from the physical and psychological damage of systematically abusive day jobs. This past June, I lost my cherished mentor, and in thinking about her life and career, I’ve found myself face to face with internalized Voices of the Oppressor.

A lot of those Voices come from corporate culture, and thence backward to the economic terror that has been the keynote of US history. In a country based upon stolen labor on stolen land, it’s no wonder that a lot of us have an Internal Editor/Boss voice that is far from kind.

So this year, I’m going to share some unconventional advice that comes from working writers who don’t subscribe to the Simon Legree School of (Self) Management.  Special thanks to my writing friend Lev Mirov, who’s been a treasured companion on the road.

  • Writing begins with forgiveness. You don’t have to write every day. Daniel José Older tells some plain truth about writing, (self) forgiveness, and the reality of writing from a marginalized position.
  • Try writing small. Give yourself easily achievable goals, and rejoice in meeting them. I’ve talked about writing bouts but here is a writing friend of mine who really knows whereof he speaks. Lev shares some additional insights in his Writer Tech interview about self-care and the writerly zone.
  • You do not have to be perfect. Essayist/memoirist and editor Diane Kavanaugh-Black takes on A-plus student syndrome. Part 2 here
  • Fun and (video) games are good for you. Devin Harnois on how Dragon Age helped him level up as a novelist.
  • Writing can be your escape from Real Life So-called, and that’s perfectly fine. Becca Patterson talks about writing in hard times.
  • You don’t have to take the trip alone. Vacations in Romancelandia, a group interview with the Bowman’s Inn Collective. How one group of writing buddies came together for fun and anthology shenanigans.
  • Know thyself. Everybody thinks it’s about productivity and word count, but it’s really about self-knowledge (from 2K to 10K). Yes, spreadsheets are a tool for enlightenment. Rachel Aaron writes about finding her sweet spot for painless productivity. Note: it is not in the least contradictory with any of the above advice.
  • Writing and visual art? Not an either/or but a both/and. You could ask William Blake, but he’s dead. The amazing likain is very much alive. Check out her Patreon for manifesto and a dose of color and light.
  • Planner or pantser? You don’t have to choose. Instead, you can follow veteran pulp writer Dean Wesley Smith as he writes into the dark.
  • It’s OK to be a work in progress. Your Humble Author shows you how: Dare to be bad and Watch out for toxic standards
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Weekend Writing Warriors: Sunday 4 October 2015 (WIP: Ship’s Heart)

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Yasmin picked her way through the clauses of the Treaty: the child-tribute, the yearly supply runs, the terms of service Aboard-Ships, the concessions.
Jehen touched her shoulder.

Ah, the concessions … in whose favor?

“We’re going to the refectory,”Jehen said.

Yasmin marked her place, slipped the tablet into its coverall pocket, uncurled from the plush nest and stretched to full height. She sighted along arms, to fingertips, to the vault of the North Tower, high above them, then swooped down to brush fingertips along the floor, turned a few times from the hips to stretch out all the muscles of the upper body.

You couldn’t forget your body, even if you were reading.

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